During our Term 1 holiday we have to make a Google drawing. Years 4-8 have this challenge in our school. We have to select a sentence that describes. We have to put the name of the book, author of the book, write the sentence and everything has to be correct and there are prizes for the most effort in the Google drawing. So here is my Post!
Hi Leah, I like the way you told us your reasons for choosing your sentences and how you justify writing two sentences instead of one; I think you are absolutely right to write both sentences. The words "death-throe tickle" sound quite gruesome!
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Hi I am Sophie from Awahono School. I like how you put why you picked the sentence and it is cool that the pictures are round. The background really goes with the theme. Your sentence is very descriptive. Your work is perfect.
ReplyDeleteHi Leah, it's Sophie from Awahono School. I really like how you have added the extra sentence and how the two of them go together really nicely. Maybe next time you could use a less spiral background and maybe put a background that relates to the book like an ocean or something. Here is the link to my blog if you want to check it out: http://awahonosophieb.blogspot.co.nz/
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Sophie
Thanks to every body from commenting on this post. I really like the nice positive comments.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leah