HI BLOGGERS!
In the school holidays we had to do a describing sentence. First we had to find a sentence in a book and tell what the page number was and who the author was. We had to put some photo's on our DLO from what was happening in the sentence. If there is something wrong please comment down below on what I should improve.
In the school holidays we had to do a describing sentence. First we had to find a sentence in a book and tell what the page number was and who the author was. We had to put some photo's on our DLO from what was happening in the sentence. If there is something wrong please comment down below on what I should improve.
Hi Leah its Reagan I love your post it is very clean and tidy maybe next time you could have a background describing your sentence other than that I really like it.
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Okay, thanks for your comment Reagan.
ReplyDeleteHi Leah, I'm Isabel from Awahono School. I like your descriptive sentence because I can really get a clear picture in my head of of the black soot floating down onto the deck.
ReplyDeleteHi Leah, Hannah here. I like your sentence describing the setting because
ReplyDeleteit describes the scene. I think you can make your sentence a bit bigger.
from Hannah
Hi Leah, Violet here. I like your descriptive sentence for the school holidays. I like your sentence because it really describes the setting and I like all the colours.
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