Friday 2 March 2018

Summer Poem

In class we have been learning to do a Poem. We had to write a poem about our summer. We had to start with "Remember that time" and at the second to last sentence we had to put "remember how". Here is my Summer Poem!

Summer
Remember that time
When you went to the beach
And saw the waves hit the rocks and splash everywhere
And you smelt the ocean’s salt water
And as you looked over the sea
you saw the sun’s reflection in the calm water?
Remember how you tasted the KFC
that you ate on the beach
after licking the ice cream first
(because it would’ve melted in the sun).
That was summer.


Remember that time
When you did gymnastics on the warm lawn
And you smelt the soft silky grass
As you did a back walkover?
Remember how you were gazing
at the glistening sun
and listening to wind whistling
while sitting in the sand pit
pushing your tired feet through the warm relaxing sand?
That was summer.


Remember that time
When you sat on the motorbike going down the farm
And when you went to the paddock,
the calves would chase you down the fence line?
Remember how one time your mum sped
over the bump round the corner
on the motorbike
in the hot sun
and you nearly fell off

That was summer.

2 comments:

  1. That seems to be your summer definitely. Good work!

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  2. Hi Mum, thanks for the comment about my summer.

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