In class we have been learning to make an alliteration poem, my poem is based on when these four girls go to the mysterious beach. Please leave me some comments down below about how I could improve. An alliteration poem is where you have to put as many words as possible starting with a letter, we used the letter M.
Mysterious Beach trip
Molly,Mary,Marcie and Miranda
Marched to the mysterious beach .
Mary moaned from hunger
wanting macaroni and cheese.
Molly moved to the monstrous shack
looking at the magnificent full moon
she magically turned into a malachite Malaysian tiger
moving towards the mysterious marble moon
as if compelled.
Miranda looking mysterious
Molly moved to the green majestic mushrooms
As she murmurs to a marvellous maroon mosquito.
Marcie marched to the log and moaned
Mary moved and was heading
to the macaroni.
”Hey Mary, that’s my macaroni,!”
mumbled Marcie loudly.
As Mary took the first bite
she pulled out one of the green mushrooms.
Miranda munched on mouth-watering marshmallows
Getting messy
With white magnolia marshmallows
In her marvelous maroon hair
She murmured in a melancholy voice
She pulled the moshed marshmallows
Out of her maroon hair.
The End
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