In class we had to write a haiku. It needs three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line two has 7 syllables and the last line has 5 syllables. Here is my haiku about autumn!
Kia Ora My name is Jaeda, I am at Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka Ako. I liked how you made this cool haiku for us it was very smart. Something that you should work on is making the last line make sense so people could understand it better. If you would like to see my blog here is my adress http://wpsjaedaa.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jaeda, I am at Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka Ako. I liked how you made this cool haiku for us it was very smart. Something that you should work on is making the last line make sense so people could understand it better.
If you would like to see my blog here is my adress
http://wpsjaedaa.blogspot.co.nz/